This has a very raw, intimate energy to it. The way you move from something ordinary and almost playful into a sudden shift in power and anticipation feels deliberate, like you want the reader slightly off balance but still leaning in. The details are suggestive without being rushed, which makes the moment feel charged rather than gratuitous.
I’m curious, when you wrote this scene, were you more interested in capturing the emotional dynamic between them, or in exploring how memory and desire blur together in moments like this?
Wow. Very nice complement. I seriously write whatever comes, yes, intended. Some from memory, some from fantasy. But, I do intend for the reader to feel the climax with me.
This has a very raw, intimate energy to it. The way you move from something ordinary and almost playful into a sudden shift in power and anticipation feels deliberate, like you want the reader slightly off balance but still leaning in. The details are suggestive without being rushed, which makes the moment feel charged rather than gratuitous.
I’m curious, when you wrote this scene, were you more interested in capturing the emotional dynamic between them, or in exploring how memory and desire blur together in moments like this?
Wow. Very nice complement. I seriously write whatever comes, yes, intended. Some from memory, some from fantasy. But, I do intend for the reader to feel the climax with me.